Moriah Leila

The cutthroat's intimidating, slow stride accompanied him to the counter. Accompanied? It sounds almost like the cutthroat's stride is walking next to him. I don't think accompanied is the proper ...

I didn't have time to read what other people had to say, so I apologize if I repeat anything that has already been said. I want to focus more on ...

Well done, this is much improved! A lot of the corrections I had to made were just grammar, so that is fantastic! Perhaps our world is real, but perhaps it ...

Ian sat at his computer, scrolling down the screen of engagement rings. A smile played at his lips as he imagined his girlfriend’s reaction. Leslie was his dream girl; she ...

I didn't get a chance to read the other reviews, so hopefully I don't repeat anything. Vashoa started back to the old, ramshackle farmhouse where she dwelt with her ma ...

I didn't read any of the other critiques, so I apologize if I repeat anything. It really helped how short you kept this, so that I was able to really ...

Here is your review as requested. My keyboard has been on the fritz, so please excuse any misspellings. "Come on everybody, pull your cards and get in line!" a tall ...

Here is my review, as requested. My keyboard is being kind of tupid, so if I am missing letters just ignore my spelling. Preamble: The very first part of your ...

Okay, so here is the review as requested. My 's' key is sticking so if I am missing some here and there please excuse it. Grammar: I know you didn't ...

I will be visiting family tomorrow and Saturday, so if you want me to review something I probably won't be able to get to it until Sunday (3-8-09). Thanks for ...

Come on people, I'm BORED!! Give me something, anything to review!! I promise you won't be disappointed.

Good job, I was very entertained. I was going to nitpick it but Pippiedooda pretty much covered all that. As for the ending, what if you got rid of the ...

Wouldn't happy-go-lucky be someone who is really optimistic. So a bad trait for that could be that their naive? Idk, I had a hard time with my traits too

Neopets!! I miss my neopets...They always died though. :cry: Anyways, I'd love for you to take a look at this novel I am working on. I have several chapters already ...

Hey Pippiedooda, I like your name. Oh and I'm always willing to support a fellow YWSer's addiction to reviews. If you don't mind: Chapter One Chapter Two Chapter Two Cont. ...